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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Legend speaks of love so grand gentlemen who kiss your hand. Open doors and walk outside protect you from lifes' bumpy ride. Place you on a tower, tall Come and catch you when you fall. Always strive to make you smile vow to stay there for awhile. Kisses sweet as apple wine tender loving, so sublime. The legend suffers in translation you'll not receive his adulation. He'll let you fall without a care when you reach up, he won't be there. His kisses will be harsh and greedy leave you feeling slightly needy. Legends, sadly, are not true. You need to look for someone new... |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Ouch. Why does this one have to be true? It's so sad to come to terms with..... Great poem, Cat, it really touched me!  -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
catalinamoon... Ahhh....I'm glad I finally opened this door to DP. This poem is one that I can surely get into!!! I love it, and you did it extremely well!!! I have only one goal in life.. It Is: To have more than one goal in Life!! ~ ~ Sunny ~ ~ |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
That was very nice indeed Catalina Moon Well done Deepak |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I don't want there to be truth to this one!!..but a really nice job here, very well told!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww Cat I see we do know the same knight. But as you asked me before we should certainly keep open the possiblites. Great poem girl. Juls |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I began this and at first was thinking,...oh my,...where do I get me one of those,...and then,,,Bam! CatGurl,...you always surprise me and why does this have to be so real? Ouch! Great writing here. Take care S. *Peace. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cat, You've done it again, you're a legend and not a paper hero at all. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Cat, firstly WONDERFUL poem, I am inclined to say one of your best, but then I practically always find myself thinking that. But, keep the hopes high, there's always SOME truth in myths and fairy tales! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
If you find the right gentleman, the legend will become reality!!! I'm sure of it! Other than that, I really, REALLY liked this poem!! Sorry It took me few days to stumble apon it Great work again! I am you #1 fan I believe |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Cat...so true I love couplets in rhyme...hey you are catching up to me... watch for my special love poem coming up tonight... ~~soft hugs M * you were one of my first readers when starting a month ago...means alot to me |
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