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Do I really love you?
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Mel2Lizz Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 20Alamosa, Colorado |
Do I really love you? Do I really love you? Oh I wish I knew... I can hear your voice, I can see your face... I feel your touch, How I wish I could be in your arms so much... You have saved my life, I have gotten rid of that knife..(in my heart)... You've made me smile, You've made me cry.... You touched my heart like no one has, You have all of the class... Do I really love you? Yes I do... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sweet poem, if he did all that for you, I guess you do love him. Hope all happiness follows. Peace Catalinamoon |
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CAVECANEM Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 43Nevada USA |
A beautiful little poem...I it brings back memories of another time for me..... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
So glad you decided "Yes" "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
very precious and sweet. how wonderful for you to be able to release your words of love!! kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
- [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I've always been able to decide "no" on that last go around there. Men have really been a lot of trouble for me. I hope to one day be able to say..."yes I do"- Good Poem. Jenn |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
That's a really beautiful poem about love. I'm glad you found someone so special. Dark Star |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
I wish my experience similar to this turned out the same way. She said all those things to me, and then broke my heart all in the same day. Go figure. I'm happy for you!  Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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