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When Does It Stop Mattering
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When Does It Stop Mattering |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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When Does It Stop Mattering .E ..M ....P .....T .. ....I ........N ..........E ...........S .............S climbing the mountain ...at bottom, the felled need not fall... from the S to the E... I keep scraping my knee... matters not much...not at all. .S ..S ....E .....N .. ....I ........T ..........P ...........M .............E having been there before,though" forever" to find, sometimes short... each rock that i climb, reduces in mind, but those fears are the gray of retort. .E ..M ....P .....T .. ....I ........N ..........E ...........S .............S belies what i'm living...if living is all full of lies...i keep climbing to find... a peace in my mind but the empty keeps filling my eyes. M *2k |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very good! loved format of poem also. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
M, I just like this so much, the format, and the words, strong and painful and oh so true catalinamoon Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice style you have used to portray this emptiness. Are emtiness and loneliness the same...James |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i also like the format in this...and i think we all here related to the emptiness...here comes my preachy bit: this may sound strange..but be thankful for the emptiness for it could have been nothingness....at least with emptiness you feel the void created by something that has left you...but with nothingness..the void has always been and has never been filled...it just exists. we may mourn emptiness, but just remember that void can be filled again. *huge hug* Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Rosebud1229 and Cat...was a fun format..just fell into place ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
James my emptiness is my loneliness.... ~~soft hugs and thanks for stopping to visit..I always feel warmed by your company Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Dawn...thank you..well emptiness, nothingness, loneliness, and void are pretty much the same but they change daily depending on many things ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, Thank you for climbing the heights, going to the depths and climbing up again. Loved the format. Hope your life is not often empty. Hugs Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kethry loved your response ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
I agree, depths and hights...A marvelous piece! Hope You reach all the wonderous heights You deserve! Kindness to You! ~Sash~ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
~Sash~ thank you for the nice words and wishes..by the way that kitty almost looks like mine.. ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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