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Softened Heart |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Softened Heart i see in ~velvet eyes~ although not always clear behind them lies some truth a warmth a loving share if when the time does come to leave this place for hills i'll settle back routine myself i promise this i will i feel from ~velvet eyes~ from what i see within reflections once of happy times a gathering now thin remembrance of the moments that in a lifetime last and added to that always yours my now becomes my past it's time each day i hear as whispers swirl inside producing kiss thoughts typed on you these feelings not denied have fought this for a while good things must sometimes end as life moves on or it retreats i hang i just suspend this story has been told a thousand times been heard a thousand letters poems prose been written read in word just names although they change i'm you you're sometimes me and in this world of lives unfurled we're all just fantasy M*99 [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-12-2000).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Short impacting words, a fine example of brievity yet full of emotional empact. Gloom |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
nicely done short yet meaningful  Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD, NeeD To LoVe ThOse Wh |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
That was so beautiful, each and every word, so pure, so absolutly perfect. Thank you. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I loved the flow of this poem and also the message...... but the last line was perfection!! 'We're all just fantasy' < !signature--> Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-12-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Professor Gloom you ARE an emotional impact... thank you for being you ~~soft thoughts Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-13-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I like this in this world with life unfurled we're all just fantasy. De ja vu. Just perfect again. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
CrEaTuRe thank you...have me wondering now what kind of creature you may be.. ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Marsha sometimes your responses are just way too nice and make me almost cry thank you for being you ~~soft hugs M |
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boji stone Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 62USA |
this was lovely, enjoyed the way it was presented also !! bjstone |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maureen, lovely poem, much meaning. Perfect flow. Cat.... Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sunny1 Kethry isn't life all but a fantasy...some coming true and the rest staying in hiding awaiting their turn...to ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Cat.... I can always count on your moon to reach out and beam me with kindness ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
bjstone thank you, nice to see a new face  ~~soft smiles and welcome Maureen |
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