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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-08-13 08:07 AM

I look at you with lust in my eye,
wanting, needing
hoping you won't pass me by,
yearning, pleading
I'm a little distressed, but still rather shy
tears are fleeting

you look my way and I can feel
passion, soaring
lost in you gaze, I rapidly reel
lose my mooring
clutch at my breast and stealthily steal
gaze, adoring

you move closer to me and I list away
confusion, reigning
watching and hoping you come my way
heart, abstaining
I hear you voice and silently sway
ears are straining

You say hello, I stupidly stand
passion, pining
looking downcast and wringing my hand
looks entwining
you move, slowly on and I'm deaf to the band
plan needs refining.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-08-13 04:35 PM

~OooEee Kethry,....WoW! Damn good read! Thankya. Take care. *Peace.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-08-13 06:09 PM

Whew, do I ever relate to this. Spectacular poem.
cat...

But words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think.
Lord By

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2000-08-14 04:38 AM

Thanks Fire I'm never at a loss for words... but on this occasion I was.

Thanks for your kind words Cat and glad you can relate.

Small smiles all
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2000-08-14 08:13 AM

Hi Kethry....

            How well I know this feeling!
         It's the first 'hello' that turns
         me into a speechless idiot!!
              Great writing, my friend..

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

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