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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Sorry, had to get his out, my granddaughters heart has been broken again. I hate this pig. Hurtful, monstrous, evil one caring naught for what hes done. Holding love from innocents never spoke a word he meant. Takes and bribes and inflicts pain pretense of love, but all in vain. Worthless, hateful, lying cad the one these babies must call Dad. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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Squirter Junior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 17Minnesota |
great poem, even though it's so sad...but so true! I love the surprise ending! At least, it was a surprise to me! That was cool! Love Always, Nicole |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cat, I like it when you write about real life events. This was no exception. Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Excellent, Cat. Vent away! I also like it when you talk about real life events. But I do wish your daughter could free herself from this man. Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Not only was this so well written, this was a truth that is so sad for your daughter, and grandchildren...You have my heart on this one, very well done!! Just wish it was not true.... The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Yes this person is evil. I am sorry that your daughter had to face such a painful betrayal. But i must say this there are nice guys out there, there is just some scum that give the rest of us bad names. A very good piece. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Cad is putting it politely Cat!! You know I understand and share your hurt and pain here. I pray your daughter and grandkiddies find an absolution!! *hugs* And don't worry about venting hon, venting is good!!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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BreyerRose Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 55Easton, Pa USA |
It sounds like the same man. It's unfortunate that people like this exsist. I have learned from my experience. He's gone for good. I hope the same is true for your grandaughter. Good piece. Hugs and Kisses, Paula |
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