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qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-08-12 07:15 PM


KEY TO MY HEART

I had closed the door upon my heart,
& wouldn't let anyone in.
I trusted & loved only to be hurt.
But that would never happen again.
My heart was closed for good,
then you came into my life,
& made me change my mind.
Just when I thought,
that tiny key was impossible to find.
That's when you held out your hand,
& proved I was wrong.
Inside your palm was the key to my heart.
You had it all along.

ELMO


© Copyright 2000 ¢¾ KT ¢¾ - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-08-12 07:55 PM


Happy poem, how nice to hear that the key has been found. Lovely poem, and good for you to have found someone new and wonderful
catalinamoon

taramw
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since 2000-06-08
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2 posted 2000-08-12 09:32 PM


Wow! Very touching indeed... thanks for sharing  
qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
3 posted 2000-08-13 12:04 PM


Thanx all, yes I have found someone special We have been together for 1 year & 3 months (on aug. 28th) & although he lives 5 hours away (albany) I hope for many more years   He's the greatest LOVE ELMO <3
kat
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

4 posted 2000-08-13 12:20 PM


I agree! This was very touching. I'm glad you found someone special in your life.  

kat

moshpit
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cebu, philippines
5 posted 2000-08-13 03:53 AM


good things come to those who wait.. nice poem, qtpieelmo.
LM
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6 posted 2000-08-13 05:24 AM


It's great to read an optimistic poem about love , for a change...  
Very nice !

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
7 posted 2000-08-13 06:35 AM


Elmo this poem was great so cheerful and optimistic. So glad you've found someone.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Virgin Suïcide
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since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
8 posted 2000-08-13 07:21 AM


hey elmo! this poem makes me feel SO good!!

love, Virgin Suïcide...


"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
9 posted 2000-08-13 10:47 AM


thanx guys I'm glad I made every1 happy for a change   see my life's not all darkness & tears   It's more like a neverending rollercoaster   Love Elmo <3
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