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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Want the impossible Dream the unachievable Desire the untouchable Need the unaffectionate Seek the uncertain Love the unfaithful Cry for the unworthy. I am undone. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
WoW...even though this was short and said with few words...it has a very strong message. I like.  Angel I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Awww... this is sooo good... enjoyed the read |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sandra, You constantly amaze me. If I could say what you do in so few words I'd consider myself to be a poet.Be Well Lynne "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sandra.... This one hit right on target!! It was UNbelievable (just trying to give you a smile!!) Seriously, I admire your work, as it gets to the point and makes a strong statement right out in front!! Great job, my friend!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
you never cease to amaze me.....good grief i have alot to learn from you.....a few little words that pack a huge 'wallop'! loved this! whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Very good!! VERY true!! Liked this one!! Thanx!! Click |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
How this just flows into the next wonderfully expressed emotion...You have another superb piece here!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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bubbles chan Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 17 |
you are worthy of the title a great poet of few words from this one Time and space are not constant, but floating around like the inside of a giant metaphysical lava lamp |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
So little words , so much meaning! This almost sounds like the definiition of my life lately, thanks! Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Same here! |
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