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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
this is dedicated to jeremiah... ~So please...~ my heart beats when you are near so please...don't leave because this i fear if you leave me i will die or at least cry for crying in my eyes is the same as dying in the eyes of love and in the eyes of love i have failed for your leaving i am punished and yet still am i here punished without you or love and you, being not punished but rewarded, are happy and at peace for never loving me or loving and leaving whichever it be and falling out of love and i falling to my death feel no more pain for feeling nothing means feeling no pain nor love, nor any other feeling i should feel. for without you i am nothing so please...don't leave. Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Hey there this poem is really making me sad. Your words have moved me and I have somewhat vicariously felt your sorrow...though you are called sadness, love and happiness still lurk within you...stay strong  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
sorry jnR...i wasn't trying to depress you |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Once again you've given us a piece of your heart and I thank you for it. I for one like to feel sadness when I read something, it tells me the person got their feelings through. Good work : ) Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find |
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