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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Shouldn't I really shouldn’t do thisS But no one seems to care The ones I love have left me My heart broken beyond repair I really shouldn’t do this But no one seem to know Because if they did Some compassion would they show I really shouldn’t do this But I cannot seem to think Cannot seem to function Without that missing link I really shouldn’t do this But no one seem to hear They don’t seem to sense My ever growing fear I really shouldn’t do this One day I’ll go to far And I can’t help wondering Will it leave a scar? I really shouldn’t do this But I cannot help myself What I really need is The love of someone else |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
darkstar... There are times in our life when we think these thoughts, and I admire how you put this into words. Extremely well penned... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hey, it is just beautiful! and I care... you now I know and you know I do... (I hope) love, Virgin Suïcide...  And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back.......... |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Thanks... Dark Star |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Darkstar, Shouldn't really do this cause it might encourage you to write more and then where would get the time to read it.  I liked this poem.Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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