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Chained2illusions
Junior Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 45
Elyria, Oh *at the moment*

0 posted 2000-08-12 10:42 AM

Anger, Hate
Twisted Fate.

Crying soul,
Bitter cold.

Silent Screams,
Blackest Dreams.

Inky hands reaching out,
Crawl about.

Minds go manic
Hearts beat frantic.

Falling farther into darkness
wanting nothing but to end this.

Sliding
Screaming
Falling
Dreaming.

Illusion in chains
Wrists with Crimson Stains.

Can an angel with a broken wing
still join her voice while angels sing?

Fell to earth on my knees,
Living a life that noone sees.

I laugh and sing for everyone,
but go alone when my job is done.

~Denise~

a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

1 posted 2000-08-12 11:39 AM

I am .....speechless! You do have a way of amzing me, indeed!
Until...

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

2 posted 2000-08-12 05:02 PM

BEAUTIFUL!

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

3 posted 2000-08-12 05:10 PM

so much was said here..and i felt every bit of it......enjoyed the poem very much!
hope things are well.
~Dawn

whatcha doing in this darkness baby
when you know love will set you free?
will you stay in the sea forever
Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live

Chained2illusions
Junior Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 45
Elyria, Oh *at the moment*

4 posted 2000-08-12 06:06 PM

thank you!

And yes things are quite well..just a twisted imagination..and a creative way to dealing with a past long ago..

*smiles*

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2000-08-12 07:59 PM

Very good writing, glad you are not this sad now!
Catalinamoon

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

6 posted 2000-08-12 09:31 PM

Denise... your poem certainly made me want to keep on reading to the end!

Good work.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2000-08-13 06:39 AM

This was a very powerful poem. It kept me rerading to the very end then I went back and read it again. thank you for posting it.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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