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When the candle's burnt out... |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
One candle left to burn now before my life will end Just one step to take before I'll have my final rest All those scars who build up just can't take them anymore Can't handle the world anymore so I'll have to say goodbye To all my loved ones: I really cared But when nothing works out how can I live on? I've always been told: life is fun life is easy especially when your young... But those people are wrong my life is complicated Too complicated for me So I'll just step out When my candle burns out....  To all those people who really mean a lot to me: I love you, but life is to hard for me to live on like this...hopefully we meet again... love, Virgin Suïcide... [This message has been edited by Virgin Suïcide (edited 08-13-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
V, I hope you don't really mean this, please think that things can change. I know that they will. They always do. That is what keeps me going. Peace Catalinamoon |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Thanks Cat! I don't know when it will burn out....but sometimes it's so hard to think that life can be positive too..... love, Virgin Suïcide.. And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back.......... |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
You're a really good poet...I like the ending. I know what you mean. Dark Star |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I do not know what to say accpt that things will change they always do.. existance is simpley that way. Your poetry is wonderful and if nothing else, I can see in your words that you have much to live for... Please be well and may your candle burn for an eternity!! Until... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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For you I'll hate New Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5 |
One Candle left to burn now, before the darkness comes... |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i do appreciate a poet who can express their true feelings...regardless of how sorrowful they may be...and you are right, many young people have very unhappy unfulfilling lives...but you dont have to give up. you will never find peace if you look outside of yourself for it....peace only lays within you...yes your candle is burning, which means your spirit still breathes and lives...it will never burn out as long as you believe in your inner sanctuary! and i do enjoy your poetry very much, and would love to continue to read it many years from now! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
For you I'll hate, the darkness is already there, and you know it is....and I can't help it... love, Virgin Suïcide... And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back.......... |
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For you I'll hate New Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5 |
I found it funny to see that you were using a ToT quote... |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
hehe, I know....guess why.... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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