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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Damn you But most of all, damn me Don’t care I’m not al you can see Inside is me Never can be changed By no one Not even you A deep dark hole Is all that´s left inside Nothing more, nothing less Than a rotten piece of human. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i like this one...and i like your name too...welcome to passions... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I too like this. Welcome to Passions... awaiting more of your words. Until... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
Nice piece dearie  and Welcome to the Family of Passion  |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
thanks to all of you! you will hear more from me later... love, Virgin Suïcide... And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back.......... |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
"nothing more, nothing less Than a rotten piece of human" liked this....good work and welcome welcome!! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow...the pain and anger is very apparent in this poem! Welcome to the family. I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome.  |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
It's a good poem. I think your name is cool too. Dark Star |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
thanks to all of you for your warm welcomes!! I really enjoy being here already!! love, Virgin Suïcide... And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back.......... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hello Sui, Welcome to passions. Strong vent, well done. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Great 1st post & Welcome I hope to see many more from u LOVE ELMO |
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