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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-08-07 08:34 PM


I DO LOVE YOU!!

When I first saw your smiling face,
my knees felt weak & my heart started to race.
I knew you were meant for me the day you walked in,
& I promised that someday, your heart I would win.
Now that I have you, I will never let go,
because I don't know anyone I could ever love more.
So your heart I wish to keep,
I hope this love will be forever deep.
Everything comes straight from my heart,
& I hope that we will never part.
Even through all our fights,
I will hold your heart so tight.
And everything that I say is true,
especially those 3 words I say to you!

~I love you Keith, don't go away. I want you here 'til our very last day!~

~When you love somebody don't write their name inside a heart, hearts are often broken. Write their name in a circle 'cuz circles are neverending!  ~

~~LOVE ELMO~~
~~~<3~~~

© Copyright 2000 ¢¾ KT ¢¾ - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
1 posted 2000-08-07 08:50 PM


Hey!  this a great poem, keep up the good work
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-08-08 11:20 AM


Yes I agree this is a good poem!  Keep up the work

DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


Tasha
New Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 6

3 posted 2000-08-08 11:36 AM


How good it is to hold such love! Fantastic poem  Really hits home! Keep it up!

Tasha

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
4 posted 2000-08-11 05:28 PM


thanx every1 sowwie i havent been around much too much work & little play makes me too tired to write a poem by the end of the day   i have 2 jobs now soo im very busy but i didnt leave y'all   im still here love Elmo <3
LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

5 posted 2000-08-11 05:36 PM


It's so wonderful when you get the person u wanted for so long... absolutely sweet poem!
Virgin Suïcide
Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319
Netherlands
6 posted 2000-08-12 06:48 AM


yeah, got the same feeling...

love, Virgin Suïcide...


And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back..........

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
7 posted 2000-08-12 09:37 AM


Elmo, good poem. Looking forward to more of your work.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
8 posted 2000-08-12 11:24 AM


thanx all i'll try to keep them coming   I have a whole notebook full but not much time to write   but eventually I'll get them all in here & I'm always making up more at work lol   it gets boring there sometimes- I'm a secretary at my college in the exceptional education dept LOVE ELMO <3
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