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Frozen - (inside insanity)
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Frozen - (inside insanity) |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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look inside to what I hide the world can not see what dwells within insanity Frozen question what is real inside a thousand red tears flowing from within my fears Frozen clutching liquid webs that are spun into my soul as the blackness ebbs Frozen screaming silently to gohsts that dance with deamons swaying and drifting free Frozen escaping into my own insanity into a mind no other can see rest my world gently Frozen "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Chained2illusions Junior Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 45Elyria, Oh *at the moment* |
I am breathless at this poem! You spark such emotion and I respect that so much. Wonderful work!Thank you for sharing Denise~ There is fire inside us all..it sparks with just the match. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Thank you so very much Chained!! Believe it or not, once in a while I shock myself...I have gone back and read this 3 times now...sort of amazed myself. I am glad that you enjoyed...was worried no one would understand...but you did and now I am content! Thank you once again. "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Wonderful psychological piece! I could hear the silent ravings of a stainless steel mind: nothing enters, nothing leaves. Very good poem. Only one flaw did I see: you misspelled ghosts in the line 'to gohsts that dance with daemons'. Alicat |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Yes, Alicat, you saw it...I misspelled it....sorry!! got ahead of myself I guess. "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
wow.....it's just great, my compliments! |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
wow.....it's just great, my compliments! |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
it's a wonderful piece of work with a deep meaning ..... btw your spelling was mixed-up (to gohsts that dance with deamons) ghosts is the one dearie  |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
I would do this poem no justice by saying anything but WOW. It was awe inspiring, and very deep. I loved it!! |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
I really liked it. Your imagery is really awesome. Dark Star |
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