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Jaded_Innocence New Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 7USA |
Does this pain of being hurt ever fade, ever change? No, the pain won't fade or change. It is never forgotten, never lost. Always there...never subsiding. Forever there...always reminding, who did what to cause this strain. Even after all is forgotten the pain returns and hurts much worse. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Welcome to Passions Amy! Just givin' you a kick start hun...and you deserve it! This poem was really, really good. I hope you'll come to like it here as much as me. Wuv ya! Angel P.S.- The pain won't last forever and it's only time wasted if you haven't learned anything which I hope that you have.< !signature--> I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 08-11-2000).] |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
nice one!! I'm also kinda new here, but i just love my time around this page..... keep it up!! luv, Virgin Suïcide... And I shall not rest, til I get my loved ones back.......... |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Hello and Welcome! i agree with Dark Enchantress..you did a great job on this entering piece! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hi! I'm also new here, but still welcome! Very nice poem, but keep the faith! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Well, I'm not new here so I can really welcome you to our family! Enjoyed this, though tis very sad.  I hope you have a great time reading and replying, making friends and posting some of your work here. I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome!  |
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Jaded_Innocence New Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 7USA |
Thank you all for the warm welcome! Your encouragement is greatly appreciated aswell.  And thank you Poet deVine for the lovely greeting card. LuV, Amy |
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