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She Paints With Blood
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She Paints With Blood |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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She Paints With Blood In a most naked room with stark white walls she paints in blood of the anger that seethes inside the cavity of her. Bare and hollow screams of hate echo bounce, shatter and fall off walls she's painted with the fuel of her being. She paints with hands as rough as stone with blood wine from the sores from the open cries. Some very abstract pieces some intricate little words woven, in messages in this secret room of her hate, of her cries locked in rage, caged up cries. She beads with sweat in nights at work her liquid life upon walls of ears, until fatigue arrives and sends her crashing body weak and broken to the floor. The cold and moist and hardened space where she sleeps with filthy hands and stained face. Where her breathing skips a breath and her chest jumps to catch it, she's slipping far,... and she's letting it happen, she's ill tonight. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 08-10-2000).] |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Very intense and from the heart. I liked this. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Spitfire, I think paint is much healtier. I think we do paint with blood, we also write with blood, and some times we let ourselves bleed or let others bleed us. Life can be a blood sport at times. I am just rambling here shocked and in awe at your words. All I can say is WOW. THat is a loud and breathless WOW. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, SF, this seems angrier than usual, and I sense frustration here. Or were you just writing about me..  Fantastic poem, cat... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Holy cow Spitfire, this poem rocks. Great imagery, and great perception of such pain that some do have.... wonderful work hon!!!!  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Rock, you do...and yes you do paint with blood...I love how you just bare your soul in your writings...I remain an ever watchful, ever reading fan...you are too cool. The lack of moral judgement is so refreshing. |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
What we do in the privacy of our own minds is sometimes brutal.....Good poem!! Thanx!!! Peace to the artist within. Click |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
incredible! intense! this is an amazing piece of work! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
This poem is raw and frightening! A real powerhouse of emotions! It is anger in its essence... wow! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Kirsty24 Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 40Australia |
Dont we all feel like that at times?? Angry inside?? Wonderful poem you have written |
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bubbles chan Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 17 |
very sick, twisted, and graphic....... i love it! |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
Very intense imagery here. I love it! I can't add any more to what has been said already. Excellent! Sing while you may -The Prophet Qa'sepel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Qa'sepel |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Fire, this poem is "bloody terrifying". I can say that cause I'm an Aussie. *smiles* Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Zounds...very intense. The narrator sure has witnessed a bizarre form of cathartic release. Irregardless, this was a very magnetic poem: it pulled me right in. Alicat |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SF, Wow, what power here. I know you have been through much my friend. Glad to see you writing out the pain. Great writing here. We have to catch up soon. Take care you. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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