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Silver and Lies
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Silver and Lies |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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If speech is silver and silence is golden then lies are fluid and truth is molten our love is a card house, inwardly foldin' and for gifts there's no cause for beholden responsibility no-one's shoulderin' when lies are fluid and silence is golden "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Well done, Like how you took the first to remake in the last line, blending it to cohesion. Gloom |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
So wnderfully put together your words of truth are. I applaud you!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~*clap* *clap* *whistle* *whistle*~ Kethry,..your words...so precise. So,so,...so well written. Yep!!! Take care KGurl. *Peace. |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
still have goosebumps. That was so incredibly well written. I absolutely loved that! Keep up the good work!! Never give your heart away, it will always come back broken. ~Lil OnE~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, awesome! Great poem in few lines. Packs a big punch. Cat... |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Once again I'm amazed by your poetry.. Wonderful words! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kethry sighing your silver and inhaling the gold very nice ~~soft smiles M |
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