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A Captive Soul |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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A Captive Soul Silently.... Here I stand at the edges overlooking the cliffs below remembering how we once soared like an eagle wings spreading far and wide touching eternity, in awe of each other. Off in the distance I hear the rumblings, a forecasting of the storm to come, foreboding, as darkest of thoughts begin to seep into my head and shutting my eyes I try to feel the winds warmth kissing me, as your lips once had, instead of the chill beginning now to cloak. For a moment, my spirits are lifted Everything becomes peaceful again I feel you beckoning to me to join you in the hereafter. Taking a deep breath, I turn slowly walk away from the edge blink back the tears, and begin my decline... MM 2k |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Maureen, you about stopped my heart! that edge sounded so beautiful so liberating... but im glad you turned away....we need your beautiful words....(though truly im assuming the speaker really isnt you, i hope!)...dont tempt me with flight sweet poet...for im prone to jump without wings and without regret! *smile* loved this! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
too cute for words, Dawn...I am not feeling all that well today..and spent a lot of time perfecting my Adult Duet Challenge so I thought I would choose some of my captive soul poems to post...I have many many moods and in other forums have names to go with them so enjoy the darkness..but know I am in the light of early morn (the Dawning of a new me....) ~~soft smile Me ahhh...heres a hug to prove it...*s |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Sorry that you are not feeling well...perhaps you should take that bath early....very solemn piece here Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
A forecast of the storms to come...this did set a dark tone, but was writtem exceptionally well!! Hope your feeling brighter soon...Loved the poem! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Jamie...you must be soon tiring of reading and responding to me..I think I could use braille and feel your words under mine ~~teasing..I am not that good at "touch" ~~smiling Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Deborah1 my mood turns on and off as the day progresses..thank you ~~soft hugs M |
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