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Dark Poetry #2

Ending Steel / I Carry

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2000-08-11 09:26 AM

City of pains and losing me,
Yet unfound,
Awaits change to set me free.

Ending steel she brought in hand,
For her pain,
Had grown more than she could stand,
Now times of demanding wills
Boils her brain,
With desperation that fills
All her soul and aching heart,
With a stain,
Her and life will now depart,
Ending steel plunging so deep,
Ending pain,
Ending all in death grim reap.
Ending steel.

Clatter down,
Wakes me sleeping dismal bound,
Off the ground.

In my hand,
Firmly gripped hands of white,
Hidden stand,
In shadow,
Red stained steel in open sight,
Doesn’t go,
It lingers,
Reminds of events just past,
I finger,
Danger’s hilt,
Pondering the evil just cast,
Living spilt,
I carry death in my hand.

Gloom 2000

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

1 posted 2000-08-12 03:25 AM

one hour 2Ending steel she brought in hand,
For her pain,
Had grown more than she could stand,
Now times of demanding wills
Boils her brain,
With desperation that fills
All her soul and aching heart,
With a stain,
Her and life will now depart,

I feel like this often, Gloom
thanks for reminding me to try not to
~~soft sighs
M

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2000-08-12 09:48 AM

Well Prof.
This is a very pointed verse and steely cold in it's execution. *Shiver*
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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