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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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Tripped wound round a live wire in moors eye i am an escapee taken back by mirrors in the blue sky and the hills wait and watch and now approach Tripped by winding paths knowing and waiting by crystal streak in my mind drifting elegantly in beautiful colours ice blue and light scarlet weaving my mind in novel textures running feeling pounding earth beneath my feet the heat of that ball of radiation radiating my brain frying my brain in pieces splintering shards grassy pillow soft shoulder earth walls of grey friend endless cool a warm bed of heather always waiting on dawn Tripped by us here in a wildfall day miles between touches of spirit colours moving are friends of dreams i speak and the vibrations are like sand hot in my nose And all life goes on around so many tracks and traces of it infinite roads and symphonies in every moment lost and yet more in the next and the next and the next the smell taste touch know mind love dream heart sting kiss tear ghost Tripped in my heart holding you all and knowing it can never be spoken |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Cool read!! I like it! Wildfall day...new phrase to me. like it. Good images. Click |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thanks Click, never know how these are going to go till they're gone! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Allan this is so lovely. Such a sad feel about it also. Very very well done. I'm looking forward to more of your work. All the best to ya, Juls |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
ice blue and light scarlet weaving my mind in novel textures well I thought I would stress how I loved these lines until I reached the end... Tripped in my heart holding you all and knowing it can never be spoken ~~soft smiles, Allan Maureen |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
This poem is just plain neat-o! Great post! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Allan,...now this is my kind of read! Straight up! Loved tripping on your words. Take care. *Peace. |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow Allan this is a wonderful read. "Ice blue and light scarlet" - "a warm bed of heather always waiting on dawn" great job. Bonnie |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
wowee allan, this is just fandabbydozy , I'm not feeling very clever, today , I'm afraid, so it's just fandabbydozy .  < !signature-->Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo [This message has been edited by lotharingia (edited 08-11-2000).] |
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