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Kirsty24
Junior Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 40
Australia

0 posted 2000-08-10 10:56 PM

There's magnificence
In the stormy clouds above
There's silver in the raindrops
Playing on the window pane
There's redness in the blood
Flowing through your veins
There's yellow
In the autumn leaves
There's orange in the light
Of the house nearby
There's green
In the sodden fields around
There's purple
In the berries on the bramble
There's white
In the wings of a magpie
Against black
Of a silhouette tree

But everything is blue

Blue is the angry sea
In which you want to drown
Blue is your skin
In the piercing cold
Blue is the hardness
Of which everything is made
Blue is the wind
Which makes you numb
Blue are the groans
Which you hear
From somewhere
Blue is the colour
Which tinges your thoughts
Like a whisk of gentle melancholy
Blue is the stain
Which you can't wash out
Blue is the colour of your heart

Wren
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 312

1 posted 2000-08-10 11:03 PM

Wonderful use of color! Good job!

-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-08-10 11:05 PM

This was so good beyond words you've keyed into emotions so well.

Kirsty24
Junior Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 40
Australia

3 posted 2000-08-10 11:08 PM

Thanks guys.. I am pleased that you liked....

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-08-10 11:23 PM

Fantastic, very good use of words, I feel the cold, blue stain, and all the rest. Really exceptional.
Catalinamoon

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-08-11 12:06 PM

~Wow Kirsty this is really something. It's super. Incredible wording. Take care. *Peace.

Kirsty24
Junior Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 40
Australia

6 posted 2000-08-11 01:08 AM

Gee... I really prefer the cooments that you guys give in here...LOL... In Ca, they can be so nasty!! Thanks for all your words of encouragment

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