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silentsky
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 114


0 posted 2000-08-10 03:43 PM


without a watch i lost track
of time
   and
      my
         self an illusion
    (of something other than a person
         a beautiful creature idea
    with the power to die slowly
whilst drowning in a sea of some deep dark love.


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allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
1 posted 2000-08-10 03:50 PM


Mmmmm I like this, i like this a lot... Interesting feel to this... Nice....

allan

Wren
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

2 posted 2000-08-10 11:23 PM


I feel you took this strait from my brain....
this is really good, it really spoke to me!
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-08-10 11:29 PM


~Yeah,...I like how you write. I like how your words come across to me. Thank you. This is great. Take care. *Peace.
Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.
4 posted 2000-08-11 03:19 AM


Very, very good. I'm still thinking about this one. And will be for some time.

Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

ilph
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since 2000-07-28
Posts 78

5 posted 2000-08-11 04:42 AM



an interesting detachment Kat, of the being from the idea. As always extremely thought provoking. Smooth delivery. Your words wander gracefully through my mind. ilph.

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