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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Demented pieces of organic matter Tranquil peace incredulously shattered - Ones seemingly holding a form of life But the ones that don't live that life! Madmen picked from Everywhere else but here Lunatics from subterranean Natural human parks Loners and land sharks Wearing caps marked MAD. Each night They dream the same nightmare They sleep the same dead way. Each day They dream the same empty dream They awaken the same lifeless way. Welcome to a world, where madmen reside A prison blocked with No doors, No windows, Unlocked, Unshackled! Yet you'll find locked within this world inside Imbecile captives held In various states Of mental shock! Yes you'll view victims of your human pride Hallucinating creatures Crazed into wild eccentricity Witlessly submissive to rave! Welcome to this world and take a free ride Welcome to this place A grand association Of human vegetables! Welcome to this Sanatorium. Welcome... ~ Darkness imprisoning me All that I see Absolute horror I cannot live I cannot die Trapped in myself Body my holding cell ~ Metallica - One |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sudhir,...this is indeed one of those times I wish that people could actually 'hear' my reply. Agh. This is so twisty and chilling and creative too. Gosh,...you've fallen there into the darkness. This is entertaining to say the least. Much enjoyed oh creepy one! Heehe. Take care. *Peace. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sudhir, you did it again. Your pen has served you well. Take care, Juls |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Sudhir, I agree!! This was so creative, and a dar, something Ive yet to accomplish. I admire the skills here, very very good!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
SpitFire, What a lovely way to respond... Thanks Juliet, I am pleased. Thanks Deborah, Thanks for coming in too... regards to all, sudhir |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Your talent has no boundaries it seems Sudhir. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Jamie, Thanks for providing me that ego boost... regards, sudhir |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
By Gum, Sudhir, I really am at a loss for words here. This is simply BRILLIANT!  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
lotharingia, Hey, thanks for the brilliant ... by gum, what an expression  regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 08-10-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sudhir, I have read many things. Some intense and dark very dark but few things have sent shivers down my spine the way this poem has. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Brian, You think so ?! Thanks for that huge compliment... Darkness has only grown darker.... (a violent deviish laugh...  )regards, sudhir |
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