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Carnivorous Night Continued
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Carnivorous Night Continued |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Simple it would seem to break the chains of this love when it’s not your heart given to my one and only White Dove So I’ll stand trembling chained to the ground waiting for endurable pain to set me free, and then sound. I’ll howl to the moon you cold orbed beast letting my love die upon this you feast. So death to you lovers false moon leading me coldly astray with no armor way to soon. ------------------------------------------- In my search for love with this white dove of mine, I have written many things about her so please don’t get the impression of her as bad nor ?? using me. She is one of the kindest people I have ever meat, with a heart of gold, yea I know that’s what I’d say but it’s true, she gives of herself more than anybody I know. Her love of her family is strong, her love is to. I have seen an inner devotion that is true, unlike most, I just want a little of that. I know if she ever decides to be with me permanently it will be for ever, that’s just the way I am. and she is to. she is so much worth the fight, and the wait, and the patience, I’m enduring now. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I know what ya mean!! of course i would not think ill of your love.She means you no harm. Tis just the way of fate and love. Do we chose who we love or if they love us??? Click |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Joel,...you better be putting all these pieces of you and your heart in a book of some kind. Really. That second part is so cold and scary. It's image is staining my brain. hehe. Really though. Oh and please don't ever think that I think bad things about WD. You have made her out to be a very loving lady to me. Your poems reflect your pain and suffering...and inner thoughts yeah....but I have always learned that she was a good heart, a loving woman,...and I believed you....I still do. Please take care. *Peace. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes Click it the way of fait. thank you for your stay long enough to read. Spit, My newly adopted daughter, how I love thee., thank you for your kind words and support in my time of need, you have been a great baby sitter on ICQ. Ahh hell kid. I don't know what to say now. but I love you. Joel I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
what can i say when i'm speachless? this is great both parts of it i think you should but them all together sometime i love and i give you my wish to be with that White Dove. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Thank you JJ, I'll take that permission. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
If in my power, I would take away your pain....I know the sting of unrequieted love. I envy you going forth without the armor....what I had thought my armor has become my prison. For while it protects me from without, it kills me from within. No advice to offer on your relationship with WD...I'm just not qualified. Loved the poem....Hardrock. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Thanks Hardrock, I know and understand what your saying without you saying it. Thanks big guy. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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