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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
You speak no words So how do you explain And expect me to change With no words spoken I stay the same I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This little number is packed with an important message. Well done. Communication is the key...without it,...thoughts are locked. Take care. *Peace. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I don't think my dad spoke three words a day. it was hard. he was hard. this sums it up. Joel I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
So few words with such completely engulfing depth!! Lovely!! There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Yep. When there's no communication how can anything ever be expressed? A lot said with few words.  |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
I agree with this poem totally !!!! So many people expect so much but forget to actually tell us. Not all of us are mind readers Nice Poem Peace..... So affraid to love you More affraid to lose Clinging to a past that doesnt let me choose Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gav |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
WOW! Very well put!! Thanx! Click |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very well put I think!! Short, incise, and to the point!! Bridgette "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Thank you all for your replies and i'll trying to keep up with all your work so i'll be replieing to all of your great works of the heart. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I just replied to this in Teen |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
boy oh boy. i will say again, you are gifted my dear friend. words i hope you believe, tho empty they may seem. i mean them sincerely. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Now, this is good stuff.....short, incisive and full of meaning. Great work JJ....Hardrock |
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