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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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Hey girl, what ya doing there With ya eyes so blue Lookin' out at this world How's it been treatin' you? The tears they fallin' freely On lifes cruel pathway What's that ya say girl - Tough? Hey, ain't it alway? Welcome to the scene of life Girl, what ya see is what ya get Hey, but don't sit around and Take no **** - life isn't set. Come on now, smile girl Didn't you know life's what ya make It. Lift those shoulders, stand proud Hey, girl, life's what you can take. ~ Tara ~ |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Tara....great poem. I like the short, direct type...and I like the use of the dialect...it invoked visions of tough street people, hardened by years of pain and poverty, steeled to the visicitudes of life, still finding something positive. Loved it. Hardrock |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Great Tara, yes hard it is , and we seem to take all that we can stand somethimes. I love the hard lines telling her?self to harden up and stand up. yes. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Tara,..this is a great one. I like the roughness it has to it...and yes, life is what you make it...so let's get busy 'eh? haha. Thanks for sharing this. Take care. *Peace. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great poem yes we all and you can all get thru life. good job here keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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