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Saving To Die (Yet another re-post)
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Saving To Die (Yet another re-post) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: Just for you to know. It's a lord talking to his kinsman....Each stanza is coming from a dif. person. First kinsman, then lord, then kinsman, then lord again. Saving To Die: Tis the hate O lord, that comsumes thy soul Tis the ignorance of thee that betrays human whole Tis the passion of thy heart that plunges thy mind Yet in thy heart love you'll soon find. O kinsman, O brother, your ways but amuse me O kinsman, O brother it is the heart that kills thee O kinsman, O brother, Your life is but a game. O kinsman, Or another, It will never be the same. O lord but thou hath no sense in reason Tis spring, time of love, not a time of treason. O lord if thou permit me, I must imply That this thief,raper, killer is but a fly Buzzing and bizzing among our food Trying to but make us have a bad mood. O kinsman, thou doth know logic of life I will abide to thee to with hold my death knife. Tis thee who hath love in this black hearted rat So tis thee who will die, how about that?  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good stuff, DD, I like the atmosphere of it. Sandra |
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ruben_xce New Member
since 2000-11-07
Posts 1 |
this poem its pretty nice dopey like the way you used the medieval settings to incorporate the meaning of the poem good jod old friend. |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
now that is an interesting poem. Neat idea good job. Suzanne |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Dopey, this is interesting. And i mean that in a good way. It's really awesome, and I like it because it's different than what I've read today. I love you man!  Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved it DD..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yes interesting, but that word is always used with your poetry. So I will say, um, finding a word, uh....intriguing. Yeah, so, good job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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