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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
0101100010100011010 010110010111010....... infinitive yet concreate deceptively simple the DNA strands of my creation sing themselves thoughout my being the wires that twist around inside the steel cage that contains my electrical heart they pulse they pulse with the life awakened within me 010101..... how simple just as God realized his foolishness in creating humanity prehaps you will recognize hell gleaming in the depths of my camera-eyes 010110010101001..... the bianary creeps through my limbs it tingles in my fingers just a minute more.... 001011010010.... the fusion of my circuitry my eyes snap open who said spirit is artifical? the technologic messiah is born |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Strength and power in those words of yours. Hhm, thought provoking and Ooh,...cold. Thanks Wren for sharing. Take care. *Peace. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Hey, Wren, different one here! I like it lots! Mama Matrix.  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This is a great poem. This is the kind of stuff I like to write about too. Maybe we should get together in the email and share ideas... I like the incorporation of the binary. It was a nice touch. hehehe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Yep, liked the binary and the whole feel of it. Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very interesting Wren, I liked it a lot. Cat.... |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Wren, I love the pleasant surprises I get when I click onto poems here!! You have certainly done that for me again. Unique in thought...Loved it!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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