»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #2
»
other
| Dark Poetry #2 |
|
other |
|
|
lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Other He thinks He is Amazing So Hunky-dory cRaZy He flashes lashes In the mirror Pouts his mouth In berry-quiver I know he is My enemy Though his smile Is always friendly He wants to replace me He wants to Deface me With lethal injection: My brother reflection < !signature--> Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo [This message has been edited by lotharingia (edited 08-08-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 uta waller - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
HEY good one!!  I loved the way it just kept flowinggggggg!  Great piece.DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
||
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very good, Uta. Perhaps you could email me as to the exact meaning. I have 2 thoughts. Awesome poem. Sandra |
||
|
allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Hey hey a flash of colour in the dark! 8or in the mirror?) 'great enigmatic pome Uta. It'll need a few more reads but loved that you were playing with format here... full of interesting twists & turns... 'Great stuff! |
||
|
Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta...I have often thought about that person in the mirror. Exactly who, or what, is that looking back at me? Exceptionally expressed. Hardrock |
||
|
Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Interesting piece here, makes me think about the person I see....Another really good poem!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
||
|
Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
What an interesting twist on things....Great poem, with an even better message behind it. -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
||
|
silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
i doubt that my words can do justice to your poem.... but it is written beautifully. i found myself identifying with content and the words kept pulling me in and out so that i felt as if i was rolling within the poem, flowing through it. |
||
|
silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
i doubt that my words can do justice to your poem.... but it is written beautifully. i found myself identifying with content and the words kept pulling me in and out so that i felt as if i was rolling within the poem, flowing through it. |
||
|
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks for the info, Uta. Yes, I can see that now, the true story. I was torn between something along those lines, and the person just hating him or her self for some reason. Great, interesting work. Sandra |
||
|
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
He wants to replace me He wants to Deface me With lethal injection: My brother reflection .... yep says it all... well constructed piece this one... regards, sudhir |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
