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silentsky
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 114

0 posted 2000-08-09 07:43 AM

      beneath a
deep blue twilight sky i (saw the greenest darkest) roade a tricycle to my
           starlaced ran
a marathon to my
      lonely blackeyed i
   am one more truthless
                       lieless
  self of heartless (damp and murky) blind
          a race to stress
                   (the) my belief
      i am a
           walking thinkless dream
                             of melancholy
                                         me.

ilph
Member

since 2000-07-28

Posts 78

1 posted 2000-08-09 07:49 AM

oh Kat this poem takes me to places i've never been and still gets me home on time. It permeates my being with wonder. It is nothing yet it is everything. Thank you for the feeling. melancholy ilph.

Wren
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 312

2 posted 2000-08-09 08:52 AM

I love the interesting structure! Nice word choice also. This poem has good mood and style!
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-08-09 09:27 AM

~Silentsky,...I like that name. Welcome here!!! What a very interesting and feely little piece you've shared. Mmm,...I'm lost on clouds of this. Welcome again. Take care. *Peace.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2000-08-09 10:02 AM

SilentSky...

Firstly, Welcome to passions

A nice entry post here... liked your images ... and free-form structure

Hope to read many more from you...
Enjoy the place...

regards,
sudhir

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

5 posted 2000-08-09 10:06 AM

very interesting, i dont fully understand what is being said, but i still enjoy the pace and imagery.....Welcome welcome to Passions!
~Dawn

whatcha doing in this darkness baby
when you know love will set you free?
will you stay in the sea forever
Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

6 posted 2000-08-09 11:41 AM

What a lovely poem. Welcome to Dark Passions!

DkW

Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

7 posted 2000-08-09 11:45 AM

Firstly: love the name "silentsky". That is a poem in itself!
Awesome poem too! Very original use of language and style.

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

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