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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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there you are you look happy been a while since I saw you last here I am I look sad been a while since you saw me love where'd we go? we were together been a while since we saw each other you're still beautiful just like always been a while since I've seen your smile I'm still alone missing your heart been a while since you turned from me forgive my tears shed for you been a while now you're there with him still love you can't take it been a while since I heard you speak please don't go love you still been a while since I've told your heart see me here arms open wide been a while since them held you close can't you see? my heart breaks been a while since you made it whole love you always now and forever be a while before you come back please turn around. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Dear Lovely person I know as the heart break kid, I hope this is something you are just trying out for size this kind of poetry because it would hurt me so to know you were ever sad, I know I do not always reply to the poetry I read but my dear you are so full of emotions and love I so very much look forward to your work and I understand sad so very well and if you are having sad moments I send you my love and a big hug for you are so special to me, please be well. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sven,...I've read this once before and now am back again. This piece is so touching and full of meaning. Really nice expression. Take care of you. *Peace. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven how touching this piece is, like a little ditty but full of meaning.. And if she doesn't turn around hon it's her loss!!!!!  *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* Isis ~ Sovereign of the Spirit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"You're still beautiful just like always Its been awhile since I've seen your smile." Sven you have written such beautiful words. Now I am thinking about my Love...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sven, this is very sweet and touching. I hope she will turn around and meet your open arms. Very nice format, I like the way you wrote this, as well as the depth of feeling it represents. Peace. Catalinamoon Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Cerenity. . . I am just "trying this one on". . . thank you for your words. . . they really do mean a lot. . . it's wonderful to know that I have such caring friends. . .  SpitFire, thank you my friend. . . I will try. . . Isis, thank you so much. . . James. . .thank you my friend. . . glad that I could spur your thoughts. . . Catalina, this one just seemed to fall into place. . . thank you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
love you always now and forever be a while before you come back please turn around. . . If her love is a true love........she will turn around Sven. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
"...I'm still alone missing your heart been a while since you turned from me..." I just love this part, it seemes kinda familiar to me... great job! love, Virgin Suïcide... "I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..." Love is hard to live... Try to live life in love.... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Perhaps it was not meant to be for you. Intersting writing, like making order of chaos. You seem to be confused. Nice writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina. . . sometimes. . . they don't. . . thank you. . . VS, does it?? Sorry to hear that. . . but thank you for your words. . . LW, I really don't know. . . sometimes, we have to be lost to be found. . . thank you my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
definitely feeling you on this one Sven...loud and clear...your words come alive on this one... Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You may feel lost right now my friend, but I know you will be found. You are a treasure chest that some very lucky lady is just waiting to open...... Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sonjes, thank you. . . Marina. . . thank you also. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A corny adaption of an old *sigh* song now.. The right girl.. She'll get lost in your eyes, And she'll feel her spirits rise, And so it's like the wind, Is it love that she is in?????? Not all of them will turn around Sven, but one will, some day, and she will never turn away again.. Isis *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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