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The Portrait |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. 
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You stare at me with bourbon eyes Through sixty years of dust I watch you from the shadows With a secret silent lust And I hear the vague rememberings Of those you didn't know Who never quite remember Where you said you had to go You hold your endless strand of pearls Just by the gilded frame Though I've always loved your beauty I will never know your name Sing while you may -The Prophet Q'spel Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen -The Prophet Q'spel |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Ian, I could not wait to click onto this, I had worked on a piece titled The Portrait..never could finish it. Anyways you did, and I loved this!!!! I could see the picture in my mind!! Great Job!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Awesome, fantastic, unthought of words of praise... Love it. Cat.... |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
What a vivid image. Your rhymes are so very melodious! Great work! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Darren, Wonderful, really. Thanks for showing us this picture!  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
You hold your endless strand of pearls just by the gilded frame. loved this part. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~The Portrait,...this portrait,...this writing of yours....Ooh so enjoyable to read. I'll read again. And again. Yeah,...it's that cool. Your wording and placing in perfection just brought everything to life for me. Thanks. Take care. *Peace. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
excellent!! very insightful work!! kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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