Dark Poetry #2 |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
There is only the sound of the bellows. As my dented, tarnished, precious, golden heart, is tossed into the fire. To be wrought into something new? Was the shape it was in, the reason it was discarded? Was it no longer desired, or charished? As it turns molten, the unique, sentimental shape, it held for so long, is changed forever. In the FORGE it is waiting, a beautiful shimmer of light, ready for the mold. To be fashioned into a charm, that someone can love. Click |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sweet sentiments...hope you find that person desiring a fresh precious charm...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a concept, refashioning your heart in the fire. And sad that anyone denies its original self. Awesome poem. Cat.... |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Click~You continue to astound Me with yet another heartfelt poem! Your heart has been charmed ever since I have known You, My friend...Wonderful work! ~Sash~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~How cleverly thought out and expressed. Oh,...so neat the idea of this. Aah, totally enjoyed. Take care. *Peace. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
How lovely! And the new one will surely be even better than the last! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
what a way you have with these images! truly creative and inspiring! very much enjoyed the read! |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
you express waiting very very well. i can relate!! kynder |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Inspiring, I return to you the single tear your poem bequested me. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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