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Dark Poetry #2

Shadow of Love

Tasha
New Member

since 2000-07-16

Posts 6

0 posted 2000-08-08 11:22 AM

Shadow of love,
where is thy stake?
Portrate of desire,
why must you take?
Indulgence to passion
a becomming fate?
Why does love...
hesitate?
Is it a crime,
to love one's soul?
Mistrustful,
leaving stories untold?
Perpetually...
Shall I love thee
defending thy case?
Incognito...
Will I hate thee
for thy chossen place?
Bewilldered am I
For the sake of love
Yet I feel so deprived of.

Tasha

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-08-08 11:42 AM

Tasha this is great! I fully relate, and the wording and flow was lovely.
catalinamoon

Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art.
Merrit Malloy

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

2 posted 2000-08-08 02:46 PM

Very nice Tasha...enjoyed the read.

Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.

-William Wordsworth-

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

3 posted 2000-08-08 07:42 PM

I agree with Cat..feelings well expressed here. Ignites alot of questions, Great Job!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

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