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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Adore Lie prostrate before me Let me be your deity Light-up in my Christmas eyes Madden me with fairy sighs Dive into my sunlight waves Fall with me into the grave Sink into my godly arms Tie me up with daisy charms Exhilarate me with your lies Intoxicate my liquid life Drink away my divine stain Pray away my shaman shame Adore me now, I am your God Then fade with me into the fog Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is very commanding! love this! "exhilarate me with your lies intoxicate my liquid life" well done! whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Adore me now for I am your God then fade with me into the fog. I liked this phrase. Flashy poem I especially like light up in my Christmas eyes. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
A poem about all consuming love.....Wonderful! Great job! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Sink into my Godly arms..Tie me up with daisy charms, what a beautiful verse!! I loved all of it, but especially that line. Another one from a great writer!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Uta,...I'm back now to reply this time. I could read you over and over. See,...this one too...sticks in my head. These little lines from your mind that I 'chant' heeehee all day in my head. (sometimes outloud). This writing and the images it has produced in this head 'o mine...mmm. Done it again. Take care. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
I agree with all. The command for an all consuming love. Beautifully done. Hardrock |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
"Lie prostrate before me let me be your deity... ...Adore me now, I am your God" This is great, I'll have to remember this.... |
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