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Dark Poetry #2

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meara
Junior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 15

0 posted 2000-08-07 08:08 PM

One may not live for
many things but does
that make him not
worth the gold at the
end of the rainbow.
To live for things does
differ from what they
will die to protect:
a child's life
one's self respect
or one's own true values
either which may be held
high above others heads not
to have or to hold which only
shall be seen with others eyes.
Which is worth living or dying for.

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

1 posted 2000-08-08 11:07 AM

No replies?? Please forgive DP poets for this.

Anways, I enjoyed this one alot. It made me think about many things as I read it. Nice job

DkW

Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

2 posted 2000-08-08 02:37 PM

lot's of dense meaning here, many words.. I like your style... (I also like how your poem takes an hour-glass shape!)

[This message has been edited by allan (edited 08-08-2000).]

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

3 posted 2000-08-08 07:56 PM

We are all worth the gold at the end of the rainbow!! I too loved the style here, excellent poem!!!1

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

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