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Mel2Lizz Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 20Alamosa, Colorado |
I wanna know how to love, will you show me? I wanna know how to feel love, will you teach me? I wann know what it feels like to make love to you, will you allow me? I wanna know what is feels like to kiss you, will you do it for me? I wanna know if I can hold you in my arms foever, will you let me? I wanna know if I can show you I love you, will you let me? I wanna know, do you even hear me? |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
I can hear you!! Welcome to Passions! you'll either find your answers here, or end up asking more questions! Great start and look forward to seeing more from you! ~Dawn  whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Welcome to DP!! and I agree you will find alot of inspiration here. Your poem has alot of those questions we all ask...Good Job! Hope to see more The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
It's the questions that drive you crazy. Nice read. Welcome to Passions. Pull up a chair enjoy the view stay for a while. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Dark Passions.  Awwwwww yes the questions of love. Look within yourself to find most of the answers you seek.  Very nice first post. DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Tasha New Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 6 |
Welcome to Dark Passions! I once asked these questions to a past love. At the time i was so scared the answer would be no. But much to my surprise it was a no strings attached yes. Though we are now apart,if given the chance to ask again I would. I thought the poem was wonderful!- again welcome to Dark Passions! Tasha |
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