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DEBUT Movement |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i wrote this one in 98 but i never let anyone read it...until now... ~Movement~ swirling, are the inner thoughts that float within my mind just thinking, something will creep up and take thoughts from behind meshing, are the fantasies of nothing but fake lies crying, are teh feelings that hide just beneath my eyes sreaming, in pain as the blade tears into flesh thinking, that this just might be the very last breath wanting, are these hands to touch of someone else's love sensing that this love will come but hate will rise above Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Nikolette,...this is superb writing here. It's got strength and great flow. Thanks for sharing it. Take care you. *Peace. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Nik, Your writing is so powerful! This piece oozes despair. I'm glad we were allowed to see it!  lotty  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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