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lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

0 posted 2000-08-05 06:09 AM

Dream

You shine
Lights move
Be mine
Be true
Drink my
Love lips
Be my
Blood bliss
Kill my
Curse kiss
Smooth my
Stone fists
Make my
Lights move
Be mine
Be true

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2000-08-05 06:13 AM

Loth,
wow you always do this, post something breathtaking and leave me breathless
Be well
Keth

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

2 posted 2000-08-05 06:49 AM

"drink my
love lips
be my
blood bliss"

well...i agree with Kethry..this is breathtaking....i really liked this!

I know a place where I can go when Im low,into your arms I can go.
~The Lemonheads

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

3 posted 2000-08-05 07:52 AM

simple yet what I wouldn't do for a "curse kiss"...hmmmmmm

made me giggle..have no idea why..not the poem..just me responding  with the words in parenthesis
anyway  reminded me of my curse word..

THOU ART  (Sonnet..I believe)

Hold me forever, close in thy heart
"A delicious torment to me, thou art".
My mind and body hunger for thee,
Lips to be graced, in sweet harmony.
Share with me this dream, massage my mind,
Dare to desire, such passions to find.
Ever so sweetly, shadowing my walls
Be bold, entice, in your arms, I shall crawl.
Hold me forever, close in thy heart
"A delicious torment to me, thou art".
If blessing or curse, let me draw upon you,
Equally sharing, these moments, we two.
No words need express, when actions embrace
Tonight, in silence, let reality take place.
M

[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-05-2000).]

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

4 posted 2000-08-05 08:21 AM

Lotharingia, I never know what your writings will say, and I am always pleasantly surprised!! Another great one!! Different style I like this..

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

sash
Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 125

5 posted 2000-08-06 10:13 AM

I agree. You've done it again! Short o words, but packed with the power of love. Take Care,

~Sash~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2000-08-06 10:21 AM

Another fascinating poem. Brings shades of Lestat to my mind again. (I visit him a lot, it seems. )
Catalinamoon

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

7 posted 2000-08-07 10:59 PM

You amaze me. I marvel at how you pack so much into such a small space. The poem speaks volumes. Simply amazing. Hardrock

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