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I Blame You
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I Blame You |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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I blame you for this decaying heart, Since you left my whole world it fell apart, I blame you for my twisted soul, I blame you for this fear of growing old. I blame you for those feelings of melancholy, When the dark night is alluring, I blame you for my fleeting happiness, Is it abnormal to feel what I'm feeling? I blame you for the sun breaking through the clouds, It's vision a gift to behold, I blame you for the moonlight night, I blame you when the winter is bitter and cold. I blame you for unending confusion, Wondering, always wondering what might have been, I blame you for the pull you still have on me, Wondering would you like the beauty I've just seen. I blame you for my lacklustre, I blame you for doubting myself, I blame you for leading me on, No longer can these feelings reside on the shelf. I blame you for loving me, For starting this whole charade, I blame you for leaving me, Someday I hope these thoughts will fade..... To believe In Karma, is to believe in Destiny. From birth to death every man is weaving thread by thread his destiny. Karma is brought about through |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i liekd this peice alot...because i wishi had soemone to blame...besides myself... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Isis, a wonderful, wonderful piece! So well expressed! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Isis, I liked this alot! You showed some very deep emotions here. Beth~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I liked this a lot. It's putting the responsibility where it belongs. I blame you for loving me and showing me love. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Powerfully said... but really liked the implications of the last line... gives so much hope for the betterness of things. regards to you Isis, Sudhir |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Wow! How eloquent! Thanks for posting this lovely peice! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Glad you all liked this weird little concoction! LOL And I always do try to put hope or a message or query at the end of my poems to end them on a different note!! To believe In Karma, is to believe in Destiny. From birth to death every man is weaving thread by thread his destiny. Karma is brought about through |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I liked it a lot, too. I blame you for ....I can relate to all of it. Catalinamoon |
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