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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Just Sitting I am just sitting here dressed in my finest of satin so vivid a color of hue, the red of my heart with my feelings then rising, swelling my passions though I'm feeling blue, am trying so hard to not fall apart, but saying and doing are two different things, only the nightime when sleep overtakes me and into the morn does a happiness bring, baby,honey, sweetie pie, cutie, my darling, and sunshine are only a few, of those comforting, loving softest of names, that he would call me when days once were new. Thoughts in my mind now are swirling a vortex and .. drawing me to and pulling me in needing your touch and the warmth, seen in eyes, are the only thoughts left that will save me, this spin. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
MM... So touching and sad. The helplessness feeling is so hard to overcome when you have no control over what is going to happen next. Very neat format as well  {{{HUGZ}}} dear.Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
so sad, forlorn and beautifully written. Full of emotion. I love the cycles. Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, this is like diamonds among the dross. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
"I know that diamonds mean money for this art but that's not the shape of my heart..." Absolutely Lovely poem, and the shape is... a tornado I think? Very, very interesting and scensitive! Bye, LM  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
ThUnDeRkYsS thank you...well some days are a whirlwind aren't they and some drag you down...I am on my way back up watch for my 1000th I think you will enjoy it ~~soft hugs *and that will be within my next 15 posts Maureen  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
lotharingia thank you what does your name mean..I like it...but was wondering~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kethry you made me learn a new word todaythank you ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
LM thank you LM I think I was trying to do a vortex but tried so hard and finally gave up and did tiny ones ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So sad and beautiful, Maureen. If only we never had to feel this heartache.. Sandra Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sandra..I know but without pain we would never know pleasure..right...or at least that is what I have been told ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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