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Mirrored... cinquain round
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Mirrored... cinquain round |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Mirrored Timeless visions A butterfly in chains Paradise in tears of needing The Key The Key Unlocking all Memories of the night An illusion of love seeps in Always Always The silent cry The heart of pain is heard To be adored, filling the void Of Hurt Of Hurt When love meets death Another casualty Broken promises bound in tears Replaced Replaced A throw away Another side of you Dancing among imagined dreams It Rains It Rains Lost evermore Hope, within mind's portal For the sound of dance disappears Mirrored MM *2k |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Through this you show me hope within mind's portal. Thank you Maureen. Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maureen, I loved this poem, the way you set it up and the flow, and the words were beautiful and emotional cat... |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
The structure of this poem is artistic and you word choice very skillful. I give this one an A+! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kethry thank you and catalina a cinquain is a poem with lines and syllables of 2 4 6 8 2 ....compare and try one I combined many to make it a round ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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