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casket song |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA 
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tisket a' tasket a' long ebony basket, wrote a letter to my love and on the way, I lost it.. lost it…lost it… …lost it mindless chant of the damned— pure white satin encases ivory bones bloomed red roses fade brown hourglass weaves merciless web hollow orbs cotton by father time black splintered shards under broken nails gaping bitten 'scream' resounds echoes muffled sound, drowns six feet down emerald moss speckles pale cheeks crystallized silk pillow lace torn sightless eyes outweep "always the darkest before it's totally black" shadow tide despairs sees not the sickle moon interlacing fingers slowly tear apart munch the knuckle sandwich of lost hope sucking chest wound, gasp last breath, heart implodes “there is no time now, the dark night shines clear" shadow of nothing slips silently into the void mindless chant of the damned tisket a' tasket a' long ebony basket, wrote a letter to my love and on the way I lost it.. lost it…lost it… …lost it |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
HOT, HOT, poem. Just awesome. I can totally see the dark side in it. Great work.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I like the shadows, it's very very dark with no light exceptyour imagagery to show the way. Great. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
It was a long dark night when this was conceived. -the Dark Lady smiles |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I must say this is dark indeed, yet I loved it. I am not very good at these types of poems, so I complement you!! Vivd images here, just a great job!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I got goosebumps! Chilling! Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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