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Shadowed By Blue |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Fading into a deeper shade of blue, my kisses reach you never. Each day follows my every movement until Dark shows it's face. In it's eyes, a watering of words flowing into my heart, touching my sighs, spinning me 'round, 'til I reach timidly for your hand to touch reality, to brush your lips with a taste of life, wanting to shed my gown of blue. As the moon shimmers it's glow upon the waters words expressed, reflect the light hidden in the shadows of hope. I kiss the moment, lace the silence with my fullness, filling the void. Wandering the darkness of the evening blues, I am caressed by the beauty of loving you. M 6*2k |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Maureen, a very haunting and beautiful piece. Wonderful images. In it's eyes, a watering of words flowing into my heart, touching my sighs, spinning me 'round, 'til I reach timidly for your hand to touch reality, to brush your lips with a taste of life, wanting to shed my gown of blue. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i really liekd this peice...as the rest of yours... hidden in the shadows of hope i love that.... Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Maureen, this is so vivid and beautiful, full of color, I just loved it!! You are an excellent writer!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
The imagery is stunning in this one. I love the way you capitlized "Dark" and entire description left a haunting feeling, as Brian said. Wonderful Kathleen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Brian thank you for picking out the parts you enjoyed..it's always nice to know what touches someone ~~softly Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Nik...always I am in the shadows..so I ask hope to join me there..maybe someday I will get my desires..thank you ~~softly Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Deborah1...not so sure about the excellent but yes I definitely am expressing myself through writing ~~soft smiles M |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kathleen...a little secret..shhhh hope no one is listening I have favorite ways of reaching my friends in my poems... for instance these words will make someone aware they were in my thoughts if mentioned or capped....Dark...Myst, Reign...and a few others...they are my way of saying I care about certain friends.. ~~softly hoping you can keep a secret.. *s {{hugs}} Maureen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Maureen, your gentle spirit shines in every thing you do...I am very glad that you have joined us here at Passions...this is just lovely! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
serenity...well I believe these will be the soft word to send me off to dreamland..thank you very, very much serenity and everyone at passions has made this a wonderful day for me.. ~~soft hugs and smiles Maureen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, this is so right, the yearning and hoping. Thank you for posting it. Here is a tear for you. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
*sigh* How pretty........... -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
awwww Kethry...here's a hanky for you to wipe it ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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