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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Meet me in the morning when the fog still hovers close as the sun peeps o'er the waves and the night is but a ghost. Meet me in the morning while we still have time to spend before the others in your life take back that which they lend. Meet me in the morning hold me in your arms this day take me to a quiet place and send our cares away. And when the morning's over and that life of yours intrudes remember how we felt within this precious interlude. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Cat, sigh this is very beautiful especially love the last two verses Meet me in the morning hold me in your arms this day take me to a quiet place and send our cares away. And when the morning's over and that life of yours intrudes remember how we felt within this precious interlude. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
To have that time, to wash all our cares away together..why must it end? I hope someday that "morning" is the beginning for you!! Well said my friend, excellent poem!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ohh kitty,...oh oh oh. *sigh*. Morning. Yes!!! I do love this. Love the whole idea,...only wishing that the mornings like these lasted all day for you. Sweet. Lovely. Yep!!! Take care you. *Peace. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Cat, ... I am at a loss for words! This is so beautiful ... Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
cat, have i told you lately that you are the wind beneath my wing? i know i'm a dork but the song is stuck in my head.....i love your work! Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh this is wonderful wonderful! "Meet me in the morning when the fog still hovers close as the sun peeps o'er the waves and the night is but a ghost" *sigh*...sweet sweet romance whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Cat...Really, really beautiful, in thought and in rhyme. Well done. Hardrock |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Oh Cat, meet me in the morning. This poetry sings. So beautiful. Be well kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow girl... amazing. truly amazing. you make this night owl long for dawn. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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