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AnGeLiX17 Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46Salisbury, NC |
How can you tell me you love me so when I ask do you trust me your answer is no I've done nothing for you not to believe me and I'm getting really tired of your insecurity So I'm asking you now, are you done with your doubt? If not, it's me you'll be without |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Good, snappy one on the contradictions we carry around. Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Mistrust can be a very difficult thing in any relationship. I myself have experienced it, both on the recieving end of it and on the delivering end. Either way, it is not an enjoyable experience for either party. But what I've said is no excuse for someone to continually mistrust you for no good reason. The person you're dealing with should pull himself together and try and destroy the evil at the root of whatever unreasonable mistrust he may have. Good poem, btw. You did a good rhyming job. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Are you done with your doubt. I liked this part. Good poem. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
this is very very strong!! what about levels of trust? does everyone trust totally and completely?? good for you for giving them an ultimatum. Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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