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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
-Filling a Gap (The Bridge) - awakening upon every phrase i slip through my daze decided on my why way of life i bear through the strife with some i get a tingle with some i strike out some days my words mingle with some i stike out i bare my heart and soul for all to read and for them i bleed lie down awaiting an oncoming train take their pain grant every wish i could pay the price though the price of life is not free for them i bleed with my words i anticipate my goal with love as my shoal love of life, of a life of love a life in the reigns of the dove for all, not just me for even more than humanity we're all in this together regardless of the weather why should even the smallest fraction give up why must morals die as a poet my time is never up i live after i die ahead i must wage my war from here to forever more when the right path is found i shall never leave this ground i am employed by an uncomprehensible force you just can't dismount that horse when a vivid dream unfolds the soul should not be sold look deeply into the eyes of fate shake hands with destiny find a way to integrate life with poetry live to be awakening upon a ceartain phrase i have filled a page J.L. Koehler |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Someone better take care of this fire. Superb poetry!!!!!!!!!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Soft hugs to you for this one. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Sorry I missed this one! Your writing was so full of thoughts and emotions, this is a fine piece!!! Excellent work here!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Chained2illusions Junior Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 45Elyria, Oh *at the moment* |
As I told you..I would read your work..and I am beyond words... Your writing is like your personality..firey full of passion and quiet sadness.. Its wonderful. Denise |
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