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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Warm water feeling My heart is beating madly Like a fish's tail (Note: Koi is the Japanese word for BOTH love and carp.) |
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bubbles chan Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 17 |
Love the use of carp in your haiku it's great! Time and space are not constant, but floating around like the inside of a giant metaphysical lava lamp |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh,...I can so see this one. Like the duel meaning. Very neat. Mmm,....how 'bout some more of these clever little haiku thingys? Take care. *Peace. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I agree with Spitfire..would love to see more. Very original, and intriguing!!! Good Job! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is some fine haiku...loved it. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very well thought out enjoyed  Rex |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is clever. This is ACE. love it! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
A really well written haiku here - one of the very best! |
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