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Dark Poetry #2

Finding Steel / I carry

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2000-08-10 05:46 AM

The alleyway was not wide,
But from life,
It was a place that I’d hide,
My spirit and being cast,
Wasted soul,
Would this today be my last?
Intruder in my shadows,
Man and knife,
He’d lost all his tomorrows,
Cheek in a cool pool of red,
Laying cold,
Blade reveals where slowly bled,
Finding Steel.

In my hand,
Firmly gripped hands of white,
Hidden stand,
In shadow,
Red stained steel in open sight,
Doesn’t go,
It lingers,
Reminds of events just past,
I finger,
Danger’s hilt,
Pondering the evil just cast,
Living spilt,
I carry death in my hand.

Gloom 2000

Wren
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 312

1 posted 2000-08-10 08:44 AM

"I carry death in my hand"
Good line, good poem.

-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

2 posted 2000-08-10 09:52 AM

wonderfully writtenw ith a grand ending line!

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2000-08-10 01:37 PM

Thank you,
Wren & a-alibaster
for taking the time to read and respond.

Gloom

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